New Chapters Soon x

I know I've been away for like a month but I found out one day that I had 8 major exams in the next week!! AND I had exam week to revise for as well!!

Trust me I would have rather played sims -_-

But I'm back now and I am working on new chapters xx

~JoJo~

The Girl In My Attic - Intro

Hi and welcome to my new story ‘The Girl in my Attic’!

It’s a bit different to anything I’ve done before so I hope it’s good and some constructive criticism would be helpful if you pick out anything wrong!

Please enjoy x

~1912~

‘For heaven’s sake Alice! Can’t you clean a good fireplace?!’ my mother screamed at me. ‘I’m trying…’ I replied in a hushed tone.

That’s me. Alice James, 10 years old. A simple girl with no happiness, no love and absolutely nothing to live for. I live in James Manor in England.

‘Alice stop day dreaming and hurry up! We have guests coming in an hour!’ she yelled into my ear.

‘I’m trying,’ I replied again; scrubbing the rusty surface of the fire gate, ‘I’m trying to go as fast as I can!’

‘Then try harder! This room needs to be clean and you are just too lazy to even think about putting any effort in!’ Dad said as he towered over me. He didn’t look at me like he loved me. He never did. Because he never loved me.

‘Father please, I’ll be five minutes!’ I asked backing away when I started to smell the alcohol in his breath, ‘I’m almost done!’

‘Almost done!? You can’t even tell if you’ve started!! Alice you are pathetic! You will never do anything right! You will never achieve anything in life because you are a waste of space!!’

‘Your father is correct Alice. Shut up and do your work,’ mum said while pointing out her finger at me.

‘I… am… TRYING!’ I screamed across the room as loud as I could and burst into a sudden wave of tears

‘Go away!’ I yelled… ‘Go away! And never come back!!’

‘You want us to leave?’ Mum asked sternly, ‘Fine. We will lock you in here and then maybe tomorrow you will have sorted yourself out!'


 

They fled the room, slammed the door and bolted the lock shut.

Too bad they forgot about the servant corridors. They haven’t been used since I can remember, because our family is next to broke.

I made my way through the corridors at the back of the house and entered the hallway.

I had made my decision. In fact I decided it a while ago but until tonight I had never found the courage to do it… A smile slid across my face. A sad smile.

I had to sprint through the upstairs corridors, because they would creek and move if my weight adjusted them.

And as I reached the end of the last hallway; I found the stairs to the attic

Then I suddenly felt scared… Could I really do this??

The attic. Cold. Dark. And gloomy. I shivered…

That’s me. Alice James, 10 years old. A simple girl with no happiness, no love and absolutely nothing to live for. I live in James Manor in England… And I’m about to commit suicide.

All the windows in the attic are locked… Except for one.

The same sad smile came onto my face. I can do this… I thought to myself. In less than 10 minutes I’ll be happy in heaven…

I carefully climbed out of the window and let myself fall onto the roof. I was going to jump. No matter what I thought now.

I told myself I was just jumping into a pool. I would launch myself off the edge and land safely in the water…. This thought didn’t help much but I grabbed my nose and held my breath

Life suddenly felt like it was going in slow motion… I didn’t dare open my eyes or scream; I just dropped…

And dropped…

And dropped…

Then as I hit the floor, I heard my neck crack.

An unbelievable shooting pain hit my neck and I grasped it as I cried out a yelp of pain. But as I looked around, everything was black.

I was dead.

But this was not heaven. And it didn’t look like hell either… There was a thin cloud surrounding my neck, but as I checked where it had broken it seemed to be fine now…

Then I saw something in the black distance. A door or a wall… I was too far away to tell. Heaven!? I thought to myself, and I started to glide towards it.

Then as I seemed to glide through this wall in the darkness, the other side was far from heaven…

It was the attic.

‘Alice!’ I heard my mother call from downstairs. But little did she know I was dead, and I would never come.

I hope everyone liked !!

I know it’s very different to my usual style but I had fun writing it ^_^

So I hope for some good feedback and maybe I’ll do another chapter!!

The story does lighten up!! But this was the main plot x

Thanks for reading!

New Story!

New story! Woo! It's a bit different to what I usually do but I was feeling bored and decided to tyr something a bit more dramatic! x Hope everyone likes it

Hello

I'm a Sim Get Me Out of Here has been cancelled because it was just to hard to get everyones sims ready with their legacy's going on at the same time :(

I'm a Sim Get Me Out of Here!

Will be coming soon!!  I will be starting a new story soon called I'm a Sim Get Me Out of Here! It will be a sim game show where I will have six sims form different legacies and put them into the Sims Jungle! Each week there will be a vote and whoever has the most votes will do the next challenge and who ever has the least votes will be eliminated!!

People who are entering:
River Von Strunkle (From the ShyLife by LJ)
Lucy Clarke (From the Clarke Legacy by skippykitch)
Julianna Lewis (From Yes It's Another Legacy by Socallucyfan)
Sophia Landon (From the Landon Family Legacy by Melusine377)
Sophie Cronwell (From the Cronwell Family Legacy by ENTELLIGENT)
Annie (From the Crazylife by Willow345)

All entrants are from ts3.com

Hosting the show with my simself is Casedy Atsuri (From the Atsuri Legacy by PrincessIvy) Which was sadly discontinued but because I love it soo much I needer on the show!!

The story will not start for a while because I currently have alot of school work to take care of but it should be going before christmas!!